The bolded sections represent quotes from the criticism he received. All the z-snaps are in order.
Your characters are unrealistic stereotpyes of political correctness. Is it really necessary for the sake of popular sensibilities to have in a fantasy what we have in the real world? I read…
Damn, I want to read this guys book now.
And I really want to meet the ignorant fucking douche that wrote the critique. Awww did the author use a naughty word? Are you worried mommy will hit you with a switch? What a fuck stick.
Oh yeah, and this http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ching_Shih